Tuesday, January 22, 2013

SHOUTOUTS WEEK 3


It's SHOUTOUT time again.  These are the final SHOUTOUTS for GLPS 19.  This time, the SHOUTOUTS go to the best response or compare/contrast essay on the Disney movie "Brave".  

Class 13

Chaeyoung's compare/contrast essay was organized with pictures as well:
 
Heewon's response essay was well-written:
 
Jiwon's compare/contrast paper which had good comparisons:
 

Class 14

Jua's essay had great organization and included pictures and video:
 
Taehui's essay was very interesting:
 
Gaeun's essay was well-written and organized:
 

Class 19

Jiwoo's (Amy's) essay was great because she did a good job expressing herself:
 
Yunho's essay expressed interesting thoughts on family and freedom:
 
Wonjun's essay because of the lessons he mentions learning:
 

Class 20

Dahyun's essay is well-organized:
 
Jeongmin's essay has a wonderful introduction:
 
Chaeyoung's essay used colorful descriptions:
 
Finally, Ahhyun's essay had a great introduction & conclusion:
 
Congratulations everyone on your great writing! Only one more essay left. 
Fighting!

 



Tuesday, January 15, 2013

SHOUTOUTS-Week 2



Last week we were busy writing odes.  The assignment was to write an ode to an inanimate object  using descriptive language, personifications, metaphors and repetition. Here are the SHOUTOUTS for week 2...

Class 13:

The best Diamante Poem is Su Yeon's:
The best odes were Yujung's "Ode to my feet" because it was a really creative choice:
Heewon's "Ode to the Ocean" because it has very descriptive language:
Hyoseo's "Ode to my bed" because it has great presonifications:
Last but not least is Seongho's "Ode to my pencil" with great use of repetition:

Class 14:

The best Diamante Poem is Gaeun's poem about Summer & Winter:
http://gaeundiary.blogspot.kr/2013/01/diamante-poem.html

 The best odes were You Rim's "Mirror, Mirror" because of her great use of personifications:
Dayon's "Ode to Chapstick" for her colorful descriptions:
Gaeun's "Ode to Writing Book" because of her descriptive language:
Lastly, Donghoon's "Ode to my happiness" for a creative choice:

Class 19:

The best odes go to Aerim's "Ode to flour" for being very descriptive:
Min Jae's "Ode to an Ode" for being the most creative and unique:
Finally, Semin's "Ode to a bicycle" for his use of descriptive language:

Class 20:

First of all, the best Diamante poem was Jihye's about the sun & moon:
The best odes go to also Jiye for her "Ode to a Pencil" because of her personifications:
Hyemin's "Ode to Yongari" for making me hungry with descriptive language:
Finally, Mireu's "Ode to my guitar, Pinky" for her great descriptions:

Congratulations everyone on a job well-done.  Next week you all have a chance for a SHOUTOUT! Good luck!





Wednesday, January 9, 2013

SHOUTOUTS WEEK 1


It is time to announce the Shoutouts for week 1. Students were choosen based on the self-introduction post. I look at the content and presentation of the post. Check out this week's winners and good luck being selected next week for the best post!

Class 13

Suyeon's blog "Hi"

Chaeyeon's blog "Animals"

Hyeon Jin's blog "Fantastic World"

Class 14

Donghoon's blog "My GLPS blog"

Sumin's blog "Endorphingirl's fantastic blog"

Class 19

Yun Ho's blog "The yH's blog"

Jin Seob's blog "Alice in Wonderworld"

Seonghun's blog "Seonghun GLPS 19"

Class 20

Sooa's blog "Swa Cantabille"

Hyeonjin's blog "Join_me Hyeonjin"

Yewon's blog "Yoka & Ori"

Congratulations everyone on a job well-done!