Tuesday, January 22, 2013

SHOUTOUTS WEEK 3


It's SHOUTOUT time again.  These are the final SHOUTOUTS for GLPS 19.  This time, the SHOUTOUTS go to the best response or compare/contrast essay on the Disney movie "Brave".  

Class 13

Chaeyoung's compare/contrast essay was organized with pictures as well:
 
Heewon's response essay was well-written:
 
Jiwon's compare/contrast paper which had good comparisons:
 

Class 14

Jua's essay had great organization and included pictures and video:
 
Taehui's essay was very interesting:
 
Gaeun's essay was well-written and organized:
 

Class 19

Jiwoo's (Amy's) essay was great because she did a good job expressing herself:
 
Yunho's essay expressed interesting thoughts on family and freedom:
 
Wonjun's essay because of the lessons he mentions learning:
 

Class 20

Dahyun's essay is well-organized:
 
Jeongmin's essay has a wonderful introduction:
 
Chaeyoung's essay used colorful descriptions:
 
Finally, Ahhyun's essay had a great introduction & conclusion:
 
Congratulations everyone on your great writing! Only one more essay left. 
Fighting!

 



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